Extraterrestrial survival
This is a short animated about living in alien planet. This short animated will use several scenes to showcase the story of an astronaut who survived a spaceship crash and survived in an alien planet. This animated short film will start with astronauts climbing out of a crashed spacecraft.
The inspiration for this story comes from my favorite game, "Rimworld", which has been inspiring me for many years because it symbolizes the best gameplay. " Rimworld "made me understand how creative a person's story of living on an alien planet can be, after all, he may encounter various incredible things. This kind of story has always attracted me and propelled me to create this short animated.
Evaluation 1: The story is very interesting, but after reading it once, I won't read it again unless the author completely completes the story or introduces a new work, which is how I will read it again. Everything in this storybook is designed very simple, including colors, buttons, music, and storyline. I guess this is because this storybook is designed for children. I think the author is fully capable of writing a mature version.
Evaluation 2: I think the story of this website is interesting, and its interface layout and colors perfectly match the taste of its target audience. In addition, the author's button design is also very simple, which I believe is to enable younger users to operate smoothly. But I won't open this page multiple times because it's just a story book for the younger generation, and I'm already 25 years old.
Evaluation 3:I seem to have encountered a bug, sometimes the music control may fail. Anyway, I think this is an interesting story, but it's a bit short and I won't read it a few more times. In addition, I think the author should describe the plot more, as current storybooks are a bit simplistic.
Evaluation4: Um... I think this is an interesting story, if I were only ten years old. Due to the design philosophy of considering the target audience, the author is relatively simple in UI design and plot design. I found that some buttons seem to be working, is it because the author has not fully completed his work, or is it because I only received a beta version?
Evauation5: I think the biggest advantage of this storybook is its simple design, making it easy for anyone to understand the content of the story, but I think the author should perhaps add more textual descriptions to make it easier for people to understand.